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Posted 01 February 2009 - 01:58 AM

What about the rhino horn going through the roof in LC?

What about it? Again, it happens for like two seconds and is a genuinely funny moment. It isn't thrown in our face for minutes on end.

True. It isn't a good moment in the scene, but it doesn't take away from the Indiana Jones experience.


Raiders was mostly perfect in terms of dialogue. TOD was frequently terrible, and TLC was somewhere in between. KOTCS is unfortunately average in terms of writing in the Indy saga.

And I thought the horn-through-the-roof stunt was at least as goofy as the flowers-to-the-crotch. They last roughly the same amount of time, and the horn moment is more comedically scored, with more emphasis on young Indy's "funny" reaction. Neither adds much to the saga for me, but I'm not losing sleep of either.

I agree with this. I would probably prefer to not have either of them, but they don't ruin the film/scene.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 02:33 AM

And FYI, the original Indy films had bad dialouge, that is part of their charm.

Okay, I just don't get this bad = good thing. Did the original movies have silly, unrealistic dialogue? Sometimes, yes. I don't think this sort of dialogue is "bad" the way "Somewhere up there your grandpa is laughing" is bad, however.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 02:35 AM

Okay, I just don't get this bad = good thing. Did the original movies have silly, unrealistic dialogue? Sometimes, yes. I don't think this sort of dialogue is "bad" the way "Somewhere up there your grandpa is laughing" is bad, however.


You're right...TOD was in a whole 'nother league of badness.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 02:39 AM

But ToD is crazy. All the "bad" dialogue is uttered in the context of shocking the audience. KotCS throws such lines at us in very serious or sentimental situations. It's not the best script ever, that's for sure, but I don't find it bad at all. Except the "nocturnal activities" scene doesn't come off too well because at that point Willie's character is still very unlikable.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 02:44 AM

Not really...all the bad dialogue in TOD is just bad dialogue. :P Don't get me wrong, KOTCS had some definite problems in the writing and in the delivery, as far as I'm concerned. (In all seriousness, "I thought you were my friend" had me totally convinced that the whole betrayal thing was all a rouse, and that Indy knew exactly what he was doing. It just sounded that insincere.) But my point is that KOTCS did nothing more than continue the decades-old tradition of creating inferior sequels to Raiders of the Lost Ark. All three sequels - okay, two sequels and a prequel - have their strengths and considerable weaknesses. Since I expected nothing more from KOTCS, I enjoyed it for what it was and didn't shed a tear. =)

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 03:08 AM

Interesting, Datameister. I thought Ford did pretty well with "I thought we were friends, Mac." Nice moment, IMO.

But ToD is crazy. All the "bad" dialogue is uttered in the context of shocking the audience. KotCS throws such lines at us in very serious or sentimental situations. It's not the best script ever, that's for sure, but I don't find it bad at all. Except the "nocturnal activities" scene doesn't come off too well because at that point Willie's character is still very unlikable.


It's interesting that you mention the nocturnal activities scene, Henry, because the whole Indy-Willie dynamic really bugged me for a little while, until recently when I realized that TOD is the most purely connected to the '30s adventure serial roots of the series. Thus, the more shallow nature of the relationship and the rollercoaster thrill ride pace. Similarly, KOTCS started to make much more sense when I realized that they really were going for a '50s jungle quest movie with a dash of sci-fi thrown in. Now, this doesn't excuse the absence of the higher dose of seriousness/depth/tension that the other films had going for them (the grandpa line could've been Indy and Mutt's "I thought I'd lost you, boy!" scene, but instead we got more levity, which I agree was wrong), but I just enjoy the positive elements of the film too much to just trash the film and put it in the same class of failure as the prequels--I can't put it even near that close. I flat out enjoy the sucker, despite its real flaws.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 09:28 AM

It's a scientific fact that TOD is a much better movie in every way than KOTCS.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 09:44 AM

And FYI, the original Indy films had bad dialouge, that is part of their charm.

Okay, I just don't get this bad = good thing. Did the original movies have silly, unrealistic dialogue? Sometimes, yes. I don't think this sort of dialogue is "bad" the way "Somewhere up there your grandpa is laughing" is bad, however.

"Indiana Jones....always knew some day you'd come walking back through my door. I never doubted it. Something made it inevitable."

Now honestly, would anybody actually say something like that? No, it's melodramatic and over the top. But it works in an Indy film, because of the style of the films. They're made to be fun to watch--anything else (subplots, character development, themes, etc.) are secondary priorities. That's why everything in Indy is over the top, also known as "cheesy." Can you imagine the scene if we get a dramatic shadow of Indy, Marion turns around, and says: "Hey, it's been a while!" It might serve the story better by being more realistic, but it will make the scene itself less interesting and more boring to watch. It's not just a bad=good blanket statment--what would be bad for some films is good for Indy films (at least in this aspect).

The reason the "Somewhere your grandpa is laughing" line is bad is because it's out of character. It transforms Indy from a daring adventurer into a chuckling old man.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 09:49 AM

The reason the "Somewhere your grandpa is laughing" line is bad is because it's out of character. It transforms Indy from a daring adventurer into a chuckling old man.


He is an old man.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 10:03 AM

I'm actually watching KOTCS now and some of the music placement is awful. The placement of the Flight From Peru homage when he's swinging around the warehouse? Terrible.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 10:58 AM

Why ascribe these 'trademarks' to just one scene or just one Indy film?
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 11:39 AM

Just to elaborate on my opinion on the KotCS groin joke, I wouldn't even have liked it if it was just once, but this was repeated.
However, I admit that the rhino horn is pretty stupid as well. Though in that case it actualy served some sort of story purpose.
Your Indy suddenly realises the danger he's in and then does everything to get out of that situation.
The KotCS groin jokes are just... there... to give the audience a very cheap laugh.
BTW: I don't mind the ToD kicking in the groin at all. After all, that would actually be a fairly smart thing to do when opposed to a huge evil enemy.

I actually watched Temple of Doom yesterday and I really love that film. It had me grinning like an idiot pretty much all the way through.
Apart from the sacrifice scenes, of course. But it's a brilliantly fun movie. Completely over-the-top in all departments, but it's great fun.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:00 PM

I for one honestly appreciate your contribution on this, but I think this boils down to one fundamental difference between two distinct camps: Those who enjoy the movie, and those who do not.

I do not question the obvious technical merits of the music, but I do question its usage and here I believe JW missed the mark, moreso than any other time in his career. Perhaps it was even a first.


Well, since you already said that the music doesn't work because the scene doesn't work, how could you ever claim to be unbiased? If the Academy scene worked for you, as did the music, then you would have said the Jungle chase music worked if you liked that sequence more.

Instead of thinking of what the scene isn't (Desert Chase), why not enjoy it for what it is? Yes it is goofy, but there's a place for goofy in this world. I can totally "feel your pain" on this one, but I'm more greatful than disappointed with it. Not every scene has to be classic perfection, and a little Lucas infamy is always good for some laughs. I'll never forget how entertaining it was to see those CG monkeys and Mutt getting hit in the groin. It is just so audacious and irreverent to the whole series. And they lied about it too, saying it would all be physical stunts and FX. Totally hilarious.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:28 PM

But ToD is crazy. All the "bad" dialogue is uttered in the context of shocking the audience. KotCS throws such lines at us in very serious or sentimental situations. It's not the best script ever, that's for sure, but I don't find it bad at all. Except the "nocturnal activities" scene doesn't come off too well because at that point Willie's character is still very unlikable.


I think the nocturnal activities scene works. Or at least the spanish translation.

I'm actually watching KOTCS now and some of the music placement is awful. The placement of the Flight From Peru homage when he's swinging around the warehouse? Terrible.


Terrible? For Pete's sake, It's the raiders march.

Its not like they threw there the young indy theme, for example.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:32 PM

Terrible? For Pete's sake, It's the raiders march.

Its not like they threw there the young indy theme, for example.


It's a misplaced version of The Raiders March that just seems plastered behind the action as if it was in a trailer. That rendition sounds less like a sensible attempt to scoring that scene, and more like someone's YouTube video "I put Flight From Peru over a scene from KOTCS LOL".

It's just utterly lazy.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:37 PM

It's distracting and dissapointing.
The first big fanfaric statement of Raiders March is a re-use.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 12:39 PM

The KotCS groin jokes are just... there... to give the audience a very cheap laugh.


And it really worked, i remember the cinema i went laughing their arses off.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 01:34 PM

The rhino horn on the circus train is a near-miss, to me this is not the same as an actual shot to the groin which is always followed up with the comedic reaction to the hit. These are two different things in my book, isn't there a similar groin near-miss at the beginning of KotCS during the opening fight scene. There is nothing wrong with either of those, they just demonstrate the danger Indy is in. In TOD, Shorty kicks the guard in the groin but it is in the middle of a big fight scene. It actually makes sense for someone small to kick there a large opponent there. Also, the movie doesn't stop and acknowledge the kick by showing the guard holding his groin and moaning or something. The action doesn't miss a beat and just keeps going. Some of you need to learn the different between a touch of humor and outright silliness, actually Spielberg and Lucas need to learn the difference as well.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 03:17 PM

I enjoyed the groin jokes actually. Cheap, yes, but it worked.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 03:25 PM

It's distracting and dissapointing.
The first big fanfaric statement of Raiders March is a re-use.


I hate that it's not a "back to action" statement -- it's more of a "what? no, Indy never was out of action" statement.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 03:32 PM

It's distracting and dissapointing.
The first big fanfaric statement of Raiders March is a re-use.


I hate that it's not a "back to action" statement -- it's more of a "what? no, Indy never was out of action" statement.


People didnt want an old or retired indy.

In fact most complains about his wedding go into that way of thinking.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 03:36 PM

Indy retired in the audience's minds very long ago.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 03:40 PM

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 03:46 PM

And it really worked, i remember the cinema i went laughing their arses off.

True. And the prairie dogs and monkeys got big laughs too. Cheap works, it seems.
And I must admit it IS funny on a certain level. I just don't like it for the fact that it's cheap. Personally I like my humour a bit more sophisticated.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 05:58 PM

And it really worked, i remember the cinema i went laughing their arses off.

True. And the prairie dogs and monkeys got big laughs too. Cheap works, it seems.
And I must admit it IS funny on a certain level. I just don't like it for the fact that it's cheap. Personally I like my humour a bit more sophisticated.


Still, its not 'jar jar humor', that people didnt laugh at it.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 06:07 PM

Sometimes, when the audience is laughing, it's not because the scene is funny.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 06:31 PM

Sometimes, when the audience is laughing, it's not because the scene is funny.


In certain areas, they'll laugh about anything...and in case of 'Indy IV', who can blame them after sitting half-comatose for half an hour without anything happening?
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 06:37 PM

And FYI, the original Indy films had bad dialouge, that is part of their charm.

Okay, I just don't get this bad = good thing. Did the original movies have silly, unrealistic dialogue? Sometimes, yes. I don't think this sort of dialogue is "bad" the way "Somewhere up there your grandpa is laughing" is bad, however.

"Indiana Jones....always knew some day you'd come walking back through my door. I never doubted it. Something made it inevitable."

Now honestly, would anybody actually say something like that? No, it's melodramatic and over the top. But it works in an Indy film, because of the style of the films. They're made to be fun to watch--anything else (subplots, character development, themes, etc.) are secondary priorities. That's why everything in Indy is over the top, also known as "cheesy." Can you imagine the scene if we get a dramatic shadow of Indy, Marion turns around, and says: "Hey, it's been a while!" It might serve the story better by being more realistic, but it will make the scene itself less interesting and more boring to watch. It's not just a bad=good blanket statment--what would be bad for some films is good for Indy films (at least in this aspect).

The reason the "Somewhere your grandpa is laughing" line is bad is because it's out of character. It transforms Indy from a daring adventurer into a chuckling old man.

You know, it's really a cop-out to justify all objectionable dialogue as "cheesy." There's a difference between lines that are silly and lines that make no sense and are out of character. Marion's line... I think you missed the sarcastic subtext of it. Remember what happens next? She slugs Indy in the face.

I'm not sure I follow that "Somewhere your grandpa is laughing" turns Indy into a chuckling old man. What's awful about it is that he's saying Sean Connery is up there (yes, a reference to heaven, ugh) laughing. Did Koepp even watch TLC? If he had he'd have known that it wasn't really in Connery's character to laugh about children born out of wedlock and abandoned by their fathers for years. It's as if he just thought, "hey, people thought Sean Connery's character was funny, let's put in a line about him laughing!" It recently occurred to me that this line actually referred to Abner, but it's unlikely given that it follows Indy calling his son "Junior."

Some other out of character stuff: "I like Ike" etc. Indy is such a patriot in this movie. It's odd given how reserved and impartial he was in the previous films (and he had a bad run-in with the government in Raiders). All of a sudden he's Joseph McCarthy the Adventurer. "After all those years we spent fighting the Reds..." Certainly you can say that he's just changed in the past eighteen years, but then the company he keeps doesn't suggest that. After all, Dean Stanforth is more than a little aware of communist paranoia. And how about 1947? He was clearly pretty bitter about being thrown in a bus and ordered to investigate the alien wreckage and all that. "Russians!" "I'm sorry, I meant drop dead, COMRADE." That's a preschooler's insult.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 06:44 PM

I feel sorry for all of you who didn't enjoy the film as inexplicably much as I did.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 06:53 PM

Me too. As many flaws as there are, it's still an incredibly fun movie, and there are parts where they really nailed it.

I'm not sure I follow that "Somewhere your grandpa is laughing" turns Indy into a chuckling old man. What's awful about it is that he's saying Sean Connery is up there (yes, a reference to heaven, ugh) laughing.


:lol: Is there a problem with that?

Did Koepp even watch TLC? If he had he'd have known that it wasn't really in Connery's character to laugh about children born out of wedlock and abandoned by their fathers for years. It's as if he just thought, "hey, people thought Sean Connery's character was funny, let's put in a line about him laughing!" It recently occurred to me that this line actually referred to Abner, but it's unlikely given that it follows Indy calling his son "Junior."


I definitely agree that this scene deserved more depth and not just the jokey, "Hey, we're all cool now!" feel. I think the laughing remark was more referring to the irony of Indy having his own problems with his son, one of those "I hope you have a kid just like you one day!" kind of things, as opposed to the specifics of his problems. Even so, yeah, it's definitely shaky.

Some other out of character stuff: "I like Ike" etc. Indy is such a patriot in this movie. It's odd given how reserved and impartial he was in the previous films (and he had a bad run-in with the government in Raiders). All of a sudden he's Joseph McCarthy the Adventurer. "After all those years we spent fighting the Reds..." Certainly you can say that he's just changed in the past eighteen years, but then the company he keeps doesn't suggest that. After all, Dean Stanforth is more than a little aware of communist paranoia. And how about 1947? He was clearly pretty bitter about being thrown in a bus and ordered to investigate the alien wreckage and all that. "Russians!" "I'm sorry, I meant drop dead, COMRADE." That's a preschooler's insult.


I thought they were quite in character--they definitely fit the kind of attitude Indy would cop with his foes. And just because Indy's had problems with his government doesn't mean he doesn't love his country. His WWII experiences may have had something to do with the change, but I also can't really think of where they really had opportunity to go into the explicit statements like KOTCS has in any of the previous films. For one thing, WWII hadn't actually begun in the previous films, whereas the Cold War really was on at the time of KOTCS.

And I seem to recall someone saying, "Nazis. I hate these guys." I wonder who that was...

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 07:09 PM

And FYI, the original Indy films had bad dialouge, that is part of their charm.

Okay, I just don't get this bad = good thing. Did the original movies have silly, unrealistic dialogue? Sometimes, yes. I don't think this sort of dialogue is "bad" the way "Somewhere up there your grandpa is laughing" is bad, however.

"Indiana Jones....always knew some day you'd come walking back through my door. I never doubted it. Something made it inevitable."

Now honestly, would anybody actually say something like that? No, it's melodramatic and over the top. But it works in an Indy film, because of the style of the films. They're made to be fun to watch--anything else (subplots, character development, themes, etc.) are secondary priorities. That's why everything in Indy is over the top, also known as "cheesy." Can you imagine the scene if we get a dramatic shadow of Indy, Marion turns around, and says: "Hey, it's been a while!" It might serve the story better by being more realistic, but it will make the scene itself less interesting and more boring to watch. It's not just a bad=good blanket statment--what would be bad for some films is good for Indy films (at least in this aspect).

The reason the "Somewhere your grandpa is laughing" line is bad is because it's out of character. It transforms Indy from a daring adventurer into a chuckling old man.

You know, it's really a cop-out to justify all objectionable dialogue as "cheesy." There's a difference between lines that are silly and lines that make no sense and are out of character. Marion's line... I think you missed the sarcastic subtext of it. Remember what happens next? She slugs Indy in the face.

I'm not sure I follow that "Somewhere your grandpa is laughing" turns Indy into a chuckling old man. What's awful about it is that he's saying Sean Connery is up there (yes, a reference to heaven, ugh) laughing. Did Koepp even watch TLC? If he had he'd have known that it wasn't really in Connery's character to laugh about children born out of wedlock and abandoned by their fathers for years. It's as if he just thought, "hey, people thought Sean Connery's character was funny, let's put in a line about him laughing!" It recently occurred to me that this line actually referred to Abner, but it's unlikely given that it follows Indy calling his son "Junior."

Some other out of character stuff: "I like Ike" etc. Indy is such a patriot in this movie. It's odd given how reserved and impartial he was in the previous films (and he had a bad run-in with the government in Raiders). All of a sudden he's Joseph McCarthy the Adventurer. "After all those years we spent fighting the Reds..." Certainly you can say that he's just changed in the past eighteen years, but then the company he keeps doesn't suggest that. After all, Dean Stanforth is more than a little aware of communist paranoia. And how about 1947? He was clearly pretty bitter about being thrown in a bus and ordered to investigate the alien wreckage and all that. "Russians!" "I'm sorry, I meant drop dead, COMRADE." That's a preschooler's insult.


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Posted 01 February 2009 - 07:16 PM

And FYI, the original Indy films had bad dialouge, that is part of their charm.

Okay, I just don't get this bad = good thing. Did the original movies have silly, unrealistic dialogue? Sometimes, yes. I don't think this sort of dialogue is "bad" the way "Somewhere up there your grandpa is laughing" is bad, however.

"Indiana Jones....always knew some day you'd come walking back through my door. I never doubted it. Something made it inevitable."

Now honestly, would anybody actually say something like that? No, it's melodramatic and over the top. But it works in an Indy film, because of the style of the films. They're made to be fun to watch--anything else (subplots, character development, themes, etc.) are secondary priorities. That's why everything in Indy is over the top, also known as "cheesy." Can you imagine the scene if we get a dramatic shadow of Indy, Marion turns around, and says: "Hey, it's been a while!" It might serve the story better by being more realistic, but it will make the scene itself less interesting and more boring to watch. It's not just a bad=good blanket statment--what would be bad for some films is good for Indy films (at least in this aspect).

The reason the "Somewhere your grandpa is laughing" line is bad is because it's out of character. It transforms Indy from a daring adventurer into a chuckling old man.

You know, it's really a cop-out to justify all objectionable dialogue as "cheesy." There's a difference between lines that are silly and lines that make no sense and are out of character. Marion's line... I think you missed the sarcastic subtext of it. Remember what happens next? She slugs Indy in the face.

Sarcastic subtext or not, nobody would actually say such a line. It's there to be over the top and to make the scene more interesting.

I'm not sure I follow that "Somewhere your grandpa is laughing" turns Indy into a chuckling old man. What's awful about it is that he's saying Sean Connery is up there (yes, a reference to heaven, ugh) laughing. Did Koepp even watch TLC? If he had he'd have known that it wasn't really in Connery's character to laugh about children born out of wedlock and abandoned by their fathers for years. It's as if he just thought, "hey, people thought Sean Connery's character was funny, let's put in a line about him laughing!" It recently occurred to me that this line actually referred to Abner, but it's unlikely given that it follows Indy calling his son "Junior."

This is another reason why the line is bad, but I still say it feels out of character. Still, it's a two second line on a scene that's otherwise fine. There aren't many other dialouge blunders like this one in KotCS.

Some other out of character stuff: "I like Ike" etc. Indy is such a patriot in this movie. It's odd given how reserved and impartial he was in the previous films (and he had a bad run-in with the government in Raiders). All of a sudden he's Joseph McCarthy the Adventurer. "After all those years we spent fighting the Reds..." Certainly you can say that he's just changed in the past eighteen years, but then the company he keeps doesn't suggest that. After all, Dean Stanforth is more than a little aware of communist paranoia. And how about 1947? He was clearly pretty bitter about being thrown in a bus and ordered to investigate the alien wreckage and all that. "Russians!" "I'm sorry, I meant drop dead, COMRADE." That's a preschooler's insult.

Indy is generally on the side of justice, and it just happens that the US government is often fighting for that same thing. He's had some bad run-ins with them in the past, but he can still recognize when they're on the good side. As for all the fighting Reds, he fought Nazis at least twice in his lifetime. Not quite sure how that insult is bad in anyway, it works fine for me.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 07:29 PM

Like the film though I do, I cannot defend "Drop dead, comrade". I suppose if someone wants to really get into another two-page long debate about two seconds of a film, one could say that Indiana Jones was very tired from the undoubtedly-tiring car ride to Area 51. And by the way, I was very disappointed when I learned that they did not really film the Nevada sequence in Nevada....
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 07:31 PM

'Drop dead, comrade' was indeed terrible, but I am a big fan of 'well, the way you're sinking your teeth into those wubble-yous...'
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 07:36 PM

"After all those years we spent fighting the Reds..."


I didn't particularly like that line. It was just an awkward bit of exposition for the benefit of the audience.
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Posted 01 February 2009 - 07:45 PM

Really? "After all those years we spent spying on the Reds...I thought we were friends, Mac."

Makes good sense to me.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 09:04 PM

:P Is there a problem with that?

It's just corny. The person looking up and saying "Somewhere up there..." gag has been done to death.

Did Koepp even watch TLC? If he had he'd have known that it wasn't really in Connery's character to laugh about children born out of wedlock and abandoned by their fathers for years. It's as if he just thought, "hey, people thought Sean Connery's character was funny, let's put in a line about him laughing!" It recently occurred to me that this line actually referred to Abner, but it's unlikely given that it follows Indy calling his son "Junior."


I definitely agree that this scene deserved more depth and not just the jokey, "Hey, we're all cool now!" feel. I think the laughing remark was more referring to the irony of Indy having his own problems with his son, one of those "I hope you have a kid just like you one day!" kind of things, as opposed to the specifics of his problems. Even so, yeah, it's definitely shaky.

More depth indeed. This isn't just a moment I can gloss over, given that family is pretty much the theme of the film. And I've got to be honest; it's a real disappointment that Connery didn't return for the film. He would have functioned so much better than Dean Stanforth (a character who, like Mac, we're supposed to care for within seconds). Given that Connery refused to participate, I feel the references to him should have been toned down or removed entirely. At the very least, there shouldn't have been a big close up shot of his portrait. Jeez!

I thought they were quite in character--they definitely fit the kind of attitude Indy would cop with his foes. And just because Indy's had problems with his government doesn't mean he doesn't love his country. His WWII experiences may have had something to do with the change, but I also can't really think of where they really had opportunity to go into the explicit statements like KOTCS has in any of the previous films. For one thing, WWII hadn't actually begun in the previous films, whereas the Cold War really was on at the time of KOTCS.

Indy would have fought alongside the Soviets in World War II, not against them. Wasn't he in Berlin? I'm certainly not questioning that Indy loves his country, but there's a difference between patriotism and nationalism.

And I seem to recall someone saying, "Nazis. I hate these guys." I wonder who that was...

Not even comparable! Indy spent all of Raiders trying not to get killed by Nazis; of course he hates them. Besides, the Nazis were... evil. They were indisputably war criminals. The Soviets obviously had their share of brutality as well, but history does not paint them in such black and white terms. In fact, the movie beats us on the head with Cold War paranoia, yet it basically depicts Russians as evil (yes, Russians, not Soviets - it's no wonder this film stirred up some controversy over there). It's kind of a discrepancy. You could argue that Indy was just pissed that he'd been captured and taken to New Mexico, but then he spent all those years spying on the Reds. Indy is as jingoistic as they come. Of course, it's hard to make any conclusions about this subplot because it's just completely forgotten once Indy leaves America.

Surely you're not scrutinizing a movie you don't like way lot more than the people who like it. It would not be logical.

It is most logical. Everybody's a fanboy but me. ;)

Sarcastic subtext or not, nobody would actually say such a line. It's there to be over the top and to make the scene more interesting.

That's debatable that nobody would ever say that (remember this movie takes place 70 years ago), but again, I'm not arguing that Indy dialogue should be realistic. It should, however, stick to its own rules, keep characters consistent and be witty. I find a lot of the dialogue in KOTCS fails in this respect.

Indy is generally on the side of justice, and it just happens that the US government is often fighting for that same thing. He's had some bad run-ins with them in the past, but he can still recognize when they're on the good side. As for all the fighting Reds, he fought Nazis at least twice in his lifetime. Not quite sure how that insult is bad in anyway, it works fine for me.

It's an insult in the vein of "I'm rubber and you're glue." It's not even that Indy says "comrade," it's that he says "I'm sorry, I meant..." It's so clumsy! I remember talking like that when I was ten years old. It's the most infantile sort of sarcasm. I was actually fine with "Drop dead" and Dovchenko's punch. The following line should have just been cut.

Really? "After all those years we spent spying on the Reds...I thought we were friends, Mac."

Makes good sense to me.

It makes sense, but it's lame that a character's back story is developed with just a couple lines spoken to the tune of mourning music. It's hard to care about Mac's betrayal when he's only been on screen for a couple minutes. Like Raiders, this film opens in the middle of an adventure. But were we asked to care about Satipo when he died? Of course not.

'Drop dead, comrade' was indeed terrible, but I am a big fan of 'well, the way you're sinking your teeth into those wubble-yous...'

Yeah. It's incredible how hit or miss Koepp is. There's a very nice line here and there - I like Marion's "damn good, really good life," I like "Abner's little girl," I like Spalko's dialogue at the campsite (e.g. the reference to Oppenheimer) - but most of the dialogue ranges from functional to terrible. The script is such a patchwork; Lucas, Darabont, Nathanson and Koepp all had input into it.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 09:16 PM

The wubble-yous line makes me cringe. Can't stand it.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 09:22 PM

As soon as Ford started speaking I cringed.

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Posted 01 February 2009 - 09:22 PM

More depth indeed. This isn't just a moment I can gloss over, given that family is pretty much the theme of the film. And I've got to be honest; it's a real disappointment that Connery didn't return for the film. He would have functioned so much better than Dean Stanforth (a character who, like Mac, we're supposed to care for within seconds). Given that Connery refused to participate, I feel the references to him should have been toned down or removed entirely. At the very least, there shouldn't have been a big close up shot of his portrait. Jeez!

Why? Connery represents the loss that Indy had had to endure over the years, he represents everything that "life has taken."

Indy would have fought alongside the Soviets in World War II, not against them. Wasn't he in Berlin? I'm certainly not questioning that Indy loves his country, but there's a difference between patriotism and nationalism.

That's like saying that since the US and the Soviets were both against Hitler, the US must have been pro-communist. He's fighting for the principals, not for a certain country. It just happens that Indy's priorities and the US' priorities overlap an awful lot.

Not even comparable! Indy spent all of Raiders trying not to get killed by Nazis; of course he hates them. Besides, the Nazis were... evil. They were indisputably war criminals. The Soviets obviously had their share of brutality as well, but history does not paint them in such black and white terms. In fact, the movie beats us on the head with Cold War paranoia, yet it basically depicts Russians as evil (yes, Russians, not Soviets - it's no wonder this film stirred up some controversy over there). It's kind of a discrepancy. You could argue that Indy was just pissed that he'd been captured and taken to New Mexico, but then he spent all those years spying on the Reds. Indy is as jingoistic as they come. Of course, it's hard to make any conclusions about this subplot because it's just completely forgotten once Indy leaves America.

I believe I read a statistic that said that Stalin killed more people than Hitler did. Besides, Indy hates the Nazis since their first mention in Raiders. I'm sure this was only encouraged by all the hurt they did to him later in the film, but their principals and his contradict majorly. That's why he hates them. The fact that they've tried to kill him in just the icing on the cake.

Sarcastic subtext or not, nobody would actually say such a line. It's there to be over the top and to make the scene more interesting.

That's debatable that nobody would ever say that (remember this movie takes place 70 years ago), but again, I'm not arguing that Indy dialogue should be realistic. It should, however, stick to its own rules, keep characters consistent and be witty. I find a lot of the dialogue in KOTCS fails in this respect.

Well the only major failure in terms of dialouge was the "grandpa's laughing" line, IMO. No other lines are that bad for me.

Indy is generally on the side of justice, and it just happens that the US government is often fighting for that same thing. He's had some bad run-ins with them in the past, but he can still recognize when they're on the good side. As for all the fighting Reds, he fought Nazis at least twice in his lifetime. Not quite sure how that insult is bad in anyway, it works fine for me.

It's an insult in the vein of "I'm rubber and you're glue." It's not even that Indy says "comrade," it's that he says "I'm sorry, I meant..." It's so clumsy! I remember talking like that when I was ten years old. It's the most infantile sort of sarcasm. I was actually fine with "Drop dead" and Dovchenko's punch. The following line should have just been cut.

I like how he uses the term "Comrade" as an insult, as though it's obviously an embarrasing thing to me. I still don't quite understand your annoyance with "I'm sorry, I meant..."

Really? "After all those years we spent spying on the Reds...I thought we were friends, Mac."

Makes good sense to me.

It makes sense, but it's lame that a character's back story is developed with just a couple lines spoken to the tune of mourning music. It's hard to care about Mac's betrayal when he's only been on screen for a couple minutes. Like Raiders, this film opens in the middle of an adventure. But were we asked to care about Satipo when he died? Of course not.

I don't feel like they were trying to emotionally suck us in at this part. I just think it makes sense that Indy would be upset to find that his close friend was turning on him. If nothing else, it serves the main theme of the film.
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