SCORE: War Horse
Posted 16 December 2011 - 08:22 PM
Its quite long, but hopefully you'll get something out of it. It would be great if you can offer any criticism or feedback if possible.
Posted 17 December 2011 - 06:48 AM
P.S. A minor criticism. The second to last paragraph: I would not call Williams' music stale as you say: The music is cold, stale and more tragic to reflect the horrors of war. I know what you are trying to say but you could also interepret it meaning that the music is boring and the same-old, same-old.
Ars superior est vita hominum.
Posted 17 December 2011 - 06:57 PM
As for the use of "stale", I meant to use it a sense to describe the cold and more detached nature of the music. I was actually debating whether "stale" would be the right word because I knew that it could definitely give off the wrong vibe. I've changed it now though, thanks for the advice!
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