My second film score YouTube review!

[Kevin 22]

As always, comments and suggestions are wanted.

[Richard Penna 3,770]

I have a few comments for improvement:

- You seem to occasionally stumble or think for a second about what to say - maybe have a few notes beside you?

- I found your voice hard to hear over the music when it played

Other than that, it's maybe a bit choppy with all the segments edited together but it's a nice effort

[Kevin 22]

I was thinking that I make my title music to the start of "Buckbeat's Flight".

[mahler3 478]

You have a good concept here so great idea and well done - here's a couple of points in addition to the comments from Richard which I hope you'll find constructive and helpful:

Be more relaxed and confident with what you are saying.

Do some rehearsals first, play back and be more critical with yourself, some of the editing and music levels / mixing / placement is too distracting.

Sign off with a "coming next time" kind of hook and perhaps have an outro to book-end your intro.

That Gerhardt Lee Holdrige album is excellent you're right! James Horner not melodic?